Chen Chen told the Yale Review that he usually starts a poem with the title. I love his “Tale of the Blueberries” and his words about the process of creating, “picking up an odd clue here, an ordinary mystery there.”

Titles often elude me, so just for fun (and inspiration), I looked through the Yale Review‘s Poems of the Week for recent ones, and found many that appealed, including “Fan Mail from Some Flounder?” (Harryette Mullen), “Pearly Everlasting” (Alissa Quart), “Literal Country Music” (Samuel Cheney), and “In My Terrible Years” (Aldo Amparán).

For February 20th, I have written to a prompt from David Lehman (of the Best American Poetry series): begin a poem with the last line of Walt Whitman’s “Song of Myself, ” which is “I stop somewhere waiting for you.” Do join me if you’d like. I even asked AI to suggest titles for this poem, but they were SEO-oriented duds. Stay tuned.

The Poetry Friday roundup for February 6th is at Molly Hogan’s Nix the Comfort Zone.

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25 responses to “Only the Beginning”

  1. Tracey Kiff-Judson Avatar
    Tracey Kiff-Judson

    Susan, “Fan Mail from Some Flounder” made me giggle! Sends the imagination running!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Me, too! I love Harryette Mullen’s work.

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  2. cathystenquist Avatar
    cathystenquist

    Titles really do make you want to read on. It is an art to find the right one. I would love to find a class on titling.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Cathy, I’d take that class. I was so surprised to read that Chen Chen starts with the title.

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  3. Mona Voelkel Avatar

    Oh, Susan!!! Love the inspiration to start with a title AND love your and David Lehman’s Walt Whitman prompt!!!! Thank you!!!!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      I’m going to try starting a new poem with the title! And you’re welcome, Mona. I’m still fiddling with the Whitman prompt and probably will be until Friday the 20th!

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  4. janicescully Avatar

    The friendship evoked in Chen’s poem really resonated with me. Thanks for sharing that, Susan, and the prompt.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      I’m so glad, Janice! I like his work a lot.

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  5. maryleehahn Avatar
    maryleehahn

    Thanks for getting this challenge back on my radar. Imma start working on it today with eyes wide open for some “ordinary mysteries.”

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Oh, excellent, Mary Lee. I need to take a look at the Arthur Sze challenge too.

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  6. Karen Edmisten Avatar
    Karen Edmisten

    Oh, Susan, I love Chen Chen’s poem so much!

    I love these lines:

    I wouldn’t want anyone to actually visit

    my past, to walk right into it like a coffee shop,

    where the music playing is bad, where my mistakes are

    just happening for however long they take & my present self

    isn’t there to sigh, then say, Wait, please,

    I’m about to make an apology, many

    awkward yet sincere amends.

    “In My Terrible Years” prompts so many thoughts too (and goes along with the above.) Thanks for this!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      I loved those lines, too, Karen! I’ve read one or two of his books & really liked them. The title “In My Terrible Years” is terrific, right? And yes, it sure does go with what Chen Chen is saying.

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  7. lindabaie Avatar
    lindabaie

    I sometimes read a poem and look for a line that inspires, Susan. Your post was full of those! Thanks!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      You are welcome, Linda. I was just delighted to read the Chen Chen poem this week. Glad I could share!

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  8. Mitchell Linda Avatar
    Mitchell Linda

    ooooooh, I’m having trouble logging in to Word Press. Or, rather I’m logged in but stopped from commeting. Forgive me if this comment shows up more than once. I love a good challenge. The Flounder Fan Mail made me giggle. Thanks!

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  9. patriciafranz Avatar

    The Nevermores are reading Ada Limon’s anthology YOU ARE HERE — and I had an inkling to write poems using some of the titles from the poems in it. Or the last lines. Will look forward to see where you head with yours.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Oh, those would make good prompts, too, Patricia. Thanks for stopping by! I added a line to my WW poem yesterday. Poetry Friday always inspires.

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  10. Denise Krebs Avatar
    Denise Krebs

    Susan, thanks for the invitation to write with you and share in two weeks. I’ve made a note of the Whitman line, and will be dreaming about it!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Oh, good, Denise! That line makes a great start, right?

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  11. mbhmaine Avatar

    Susan, titles are SO hard for me! I’m always thrilled on the rare occasion when one comes to me effortlessly. I’m pretty sure that I wrote to someone else’s title once and then compared my poem with hers. I’ll have to go back and search through blog posts to find that. I remember it being an interesting exercise. I love the titles you shared and the playful spirit of the first one. Thanks for the invitation to join you in writing to Whitman’s line later this month.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Oh now that would be fun, writing to someone else’s title. I’d love to see that blog post!

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  12. Michelle Kogan Art, Illustration, & Writing Avatar

    I love this poem by Chen Chen, it feels so personal and in the moment as if you could climb right in and curl up inside.

    I’m remembering your prompt from a few posts ago, wasn’t it also tied to a poet you are reading, I’ll have to go back and check, thanks Susan.☺️

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Yes, you’re right, Michelle. I recently wrote a poem inspired by Donika Kelly.

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  13. margaretsmn Avatar
    margaretsmn

    I’ve noted your prompt for Feb. 20th. Thanks for those great titles, too.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      I am hosting on the 20th, so I thought it would be something fun to do!

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