“White Fist” (1968) by Bob Haozous, part of “Bob Haozous: A Retrospective View,” at the Heard Museum, Phoenix

This week’s poem is “Making a Fist,” by Naomi Shihab Nye. It begins,

For the first time, on the road north of Tampico,
I felt the life sliding out of me,
a drum in the desert, harder and harder to hear.

You can read the rest of the poem at the Academy of American Poets.

“Making a Fist” is one of the first poems I read in a creative writing class at Columbia many years ago. I attended as a continuing-education student, and it has stayed with me all this time. In fact, I used the anthology it appeared in as the source for a cento that was published at Unlost, which includes a line from “Making a Fist.” The Columbia class was foundational in helping me drop my defensive “I don’t get it” approach to poetry. Worlds opened up! When I saw Bob Haozous’s sculpture “White Fist,” above, at the Heard Museum of Native American art, I made an immediate link to the Nye work.

“Bob Haozous: A Retrospective View” continues through November 30th at the Heard. I highly recommend a visit.

Poetry Friday is a longstanding tradition that began in the early days of the children’s book blogs, inspired by something similar among academic bloggers. (Shout-out to Grinnell professor Kelly Herold!) Everyone is welcome to join in. You’ll find a mix of subjects: original poetry (for kids, for adults), links to other poems, and other poetic adventures. You can read more about this fun weekly practice here and here. The Poetry Friday roundup for November 7th is at author Laura Purdie Salas’s place.

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Reminder: Next week several of us are attempting to walk in poet Donika Kelly’s footsteps; we’re responding to a meme or popular Internet video. Kelly’s poem is a serious piece with a fabulous turn at the end. Do join in if this appeals to you! I’ll publish my poem on Friday, November 14th. See last week’s post with additional details and a link to the mentor poem.

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32 responses to “A drum in the desert”

  1. maryleehahn Avatar
    maryleehahn

    I can TOTALLY see why that sculpture brought Nye’s poem to mind!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Yes, immediately! Great museum.

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  2. Mona Voelkel Avatar

    Thank you for sharing that poem and sculpture! So much power and story in both!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      You’re welcome. Thanks for stopping by!

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  3. lindabaie Avatar
    lindabaie

    What a find for you when you saw that fist, Susan. I so admire those who seem to “see” something in what to me is just a block of something. This, by Michelangelo: “I saw the angel in the marble and carved until I set him free“.  And, the poem you shared entices me to think more openly about our lives, “the borders we must cross separately”. Thank you for your thoughtful post!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      You’re welcome! Thank you for stopping by. I do not know how sculptors do it; a big hunk of stone seems so much more intimidating than a blank page. Chisel by chisel, I suppose.

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  4. Karen Edmisten Avatar
    Karen Edmisten

    “…clenching and opening one small hand.” Wow, I love that final line.

    I love Naomi Shihab Nye’s work. I was at a webinar today where she spoke to us (with James Crews) about poetry and grief. She was the last of four presenters in a four-week long workshop called “Turning Toward Grief.” (Others included George Bilgere, January Gill O’Neil, and Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer.) Loved it all.

    Looking forward to next week!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Oh, my gosh, what a neat webinar, Karen. Has it inspired some writing?

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      1. Karen Edmisten Avatar
        Karen Edmisten

        It has, Susan. Each session included time to work on one prompt, but several other prompts were also included each week. I’ll be going back to those. It’s been a great experience.

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      2. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
        Susan.Thomsen

        It sounds like a great webinar, Karen.

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  5. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar

    Susan, What a cooincidence we both shared poems from the same poet today. I had never read Making a Fist and enjoyed it in its entirety. Thank you. It is a powerful poem, encapsulating things we all wonder about as children without giving too much detail. Your visit to the museum reminded me that I, too, visited a wonderful museum recently. Last Saturday my husband and I went to the Public Museum of Milwaukee. It was impressive. And in Scotland, last month, we went to the National Gallery in Edinburgh. You’ve inspired me to write of my experiences at those places. Thanks, again.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      I almost always find something to research or write about after visiting a museum. Maybe you’ve got a poem brewing from one of your recent visits, too, Carol!

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  6. Michelle Kogan Art, Illustration, & Writing Avatar

    “You Keep Me Waiting in a Truck” is a powerful poem, Love the pumpkin moon in there and serendipitous Tampico mention, thanks for sharing the link! And then Haozous’ “White Fist” so many connecting paths here…

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Thanks so much, Michelle! There was so much to see at the Heard that we could only choose part of it. Fortunately, our son lives in AZ, so there will be time to return and take in more exhibits.

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  7. patriciafranz Avatar

    I love the Heard! How wonderful to see art that brings forth memorable poetry. Sort of a “lived ekphrastic” experience!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Yes, I like that idea, Patricia. I’m looking forward to my next trip to the Heard! So much to see.

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  8. Laura Purdie Salas Avatar

    What a poem! Thanks for sharing this Nye gem, Susan :>)

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      You’re welcome, Laura! Thank YOU for rounding up.

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  9. jama Avatar

    How did I miss this Nye poem? Thanks so much for sharing it this week. Enjoyed hearing about how it influenced you going forward. And that sculpture is so powerful — great connection to the poem.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Thanks, Jama! “Making a Fist” is a powerful poem, and that fist sculpture is amazing, too.

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    2. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Thanks, Jama! “Making a Fist” is a powerful poem, and that fist sculpture is amazing, too.

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  10. rosecappelli Avatar

    Thanks for sharing the poem and the sculpture, Susan. Both are wonders!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      You’re welcome, Rose! I tried to comment on your blog, too, but I don’t think it went through. The Highlights weekend sounds great, and I enjoyed reading the resulting poems.

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  11. Linda Mitchell Avatar
    Linda Mitchell

    Oh, my goodness…that last line of the child opening and closing her fist. Wow.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      I agree!

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  12. margaretsmn Avatar
    margaretsmn

    I love how you connected the poem by my poet-hero and that amazing sculpture. And thanks for linking back to the poem. I imagine one of my grandchildren asking that question as we have had a few deaths to face lately.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Aw, thanks, Margaret. Those losses are hard for the little sweethearts to understand, I’m sure.

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  13. macrush53 Avatar

    I am so glad to read this new to me Naomi Shihab Nye poems. I love the Heard Museum.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      I’m happy that you enjoyed it, Jone! Very powerful, right? The Heard is a fascinating place.

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  14. Wezzlehead Avatar

    Great post, Susan. I’m really pleased to have found your blog. And thanks for guiding me to a previously undiscovered piece by a poet whose work I always enjoy.

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  15. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
    Susan.Thomsen

    You’re welcome! Thanks for stopping by. Your comment is a good reminder for me to read more by Naomi Shihab Nye.

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