Four people in bathing suits,

including a tan man in a thong, 

American herring gulls and a Ring-billed gull,

Double-crested cormorants standing guard on the jetty,

Footprints in the sand,

My own earbud on the ground too many times,

A Northern mockingbird, 

A sign saying the snack bar is open 

(It wasn’t.),

Chestnut hunters, and a man with a stick,

A birthday ribbon in the dirt,

One lobster boat,

A flat Long Island Sound,

Doldrums for a sailor, and

Perfect for water skiing,

Should one be so inclined.

*****

An aspect of participating in Poetry Friday that I especially enjoy is that it puts me in a poetic frame of mind, and one thing leads to another. In this case, I was taking a walk at the nearby state park and started taking pictures of flowers with my phone. That turned into collecting other images in my head, and when I got back to the car, I scribbled everything down on an envelope. Lists, process, projects, themes, ways in: all fun things to think about when you’re looking around with the Poetry Friday lens.

An earlier version of this post, with additional photos, appeared on Instagram. You’ll find the Poetry Friday roundup at Matt Forrest Esenwine’s blog today.





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20 responses to “On a walk September 30th, or what I saw besides flowers”

  1. Matt Forrest Esenwine Avatar

    Very observant, Susan – what a wonderful walk it was!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      It was indeed!

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  3. Jane the Raincity Librarian Avatar

    I’m always moving so quickly these days, rushing rushing rushing. I always appreciate a reminder to be in the moment and observe the world around me. 🙂

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      It was a good morning to slow down, Jane! Blue skies, nice temps, beautiful setting.

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  4. Tabatha Avatar

    Chestnut hunters! Human or squirrel?

    “Doldrums” is such an evocative word!

    Thanks for the fun list poem idea!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Ha, Tabatha! The chestnut hunters are human in this case. I see them every fall. The park does have plenty of squirrels, though. Thanks for stopping by.

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  5. cvarsalona Avatar

    Susan, your list poem evolved from being in the moment on your walk. You were so observant. One of the sightings was the man in a thong. Shall I laugh or sigh? I have not seen that ever on the beaches of Long Island. I enjoyed reading your poem.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Carol, it was a fun day for a walk, and I did get tickled about the folks in bathing suits. To me, it seemed a little too chilly! But for the dedicated sun-tanners, I guess not. Thanks for visiting!

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  6. Alan j Wright Avatar

    I’m a sucker for a list poem, Susan and yours has a rich diversity of ingredients drawing me ever onward. Walking provides the poet with such a treasure trove of potential possibilities and you had your antenna finely tuned.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Alan, thanks so much for your kind words. I just love lists. Many years ago I even worked making lists (of cultural events)!

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  7. Linda Mitchell Avatar
    Linda Mitchell

    I can relate to that earbud on the ground…too many times! And, I have the kind with the hook that goes over my ear. Ugh! Great list poem.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      It’s so irritating, right? I really don’t want headphones, but may have to go that route. Thanks for the nice words about the poem.

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  8. maryleehahn Avatar
    maryleehahn

    I love walking a noticing with you! What a fun list poem!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Thanks, Mary Lee! You’re giving me an idea to organize a poets’ walk. Wouldn’t that be fun?

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      1. maryleehahn Avatar
        maryleehahn

        I’m in for that!

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  9. margaretsmn Avatar
    margaretsmn

    Thanks for taking us on the walk with you. Such a wonderful list poem! I had to chuckle about your ear bud.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      It’s an issue, that earbud. ha! Come along on a walk any time, Margaret!

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  10. patriciafranz Avatar

    I’m laughing…”tan man in a thong”… not an image I want to sit with– Imagine his reaction if he knew he made it into a poem! But I do love this list of observations and especially that “flat Long Island sound.” Thank you, Susan.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Patricia, ha, the thong guy did end up in a poem. As a kid, I did water ski, and the search for ideal conditions is ingrained!

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