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Break is a word
That kicks at the end,
With legs of a K
Severing ties,
Though it begins
With a buxom, promising B.

Break can be rest,
Pause measured by coffee,
Perhaps in class,
Perhaps at the office,
A siesta of sorts
As darkness drops in.

Break is a verb
Employed against horses,
Stomping spirits,
Rupturing traditions,
Punting friends,
Into dangerous orbits.

Mend is a word
That fixes the break,
That sets the bone,
That patches the hole.
Mend offers a hand
And does not let go.

How is the adverb,
How is the work.

Draft, Susan Thomsen 2025

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A month ago the Poetry Sisters offered a challenge for February: to create a "__ Is a Word" poem, a form invented by Nikki Grimes and shared by Michelle Barnes. (Thank you to Tanita S. Davis for the background.) The above, a very rough draft, is what I came up with. Should I keep the last two lines or set them free?

The Poetry Friday roundup for February 28th is at Denise Krebs' blog.

Image: Latin dictionary photo by Dr. Marcus Gossler, used under the license Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0. Source: Wikimedia Commons.

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  1. Jane Avatar

    Isn’t language fascinating – I love the way words can have so many forms, so many meanings. A word like break can be both positive and negative, depending on the context. Right now I could really use a break, to break away, before all the stress breaks my heart.

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  2. Susan T. Avatar
    Susan T.

    All the breakage! Thanks for reading, Jane.

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  3. Rose Cappelli Avatar
    Rose Cappelli

    I like the way you juxtaposed break and mend. Very clever. And your title fits so well. I had fun with this exercise, too. As for your last two lines, I think I know what you are getting at, but focusing on break and mend feels more focused. It might be best to set them free.

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  4. Susan T. Avatar
    Susan T.

    Thanks, Rose. That helps!

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  5. Tracey Kiff-Judson Avatar

    Wonderful, rich language and thought! I love that you paired break with mend at the end. It softens the landing and makes us feel like everything is going to be ok after all.

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  6. Irene Latham Avatar
    Irene Latham

    I love the “How” lines at the end, Susan!

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  7. Susan T. Avatar
    Susan T.

    Tracey, thanks so much. I almost said, “Be the mend” at the end as a reminder to myself. Irene, ha! I appreciate the differing opinions. Back in 8th grade, I loved diagramming sentences, so writing about parts of speech and trying to tie everything together is a fun challenge. Oddly, the rhyming (or near rhyming) was inadvertent here, and if I work on the draft, it’s something I’ll have to contend with.

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  8. Laura Purdie Salas Avatar

    Susan, this is fabulous! It’s powerful, and I love that buxom B and kicking k. I also love how you have all the breaking and then the simple mend stanza. Well I really like the last two lines because they surprise me, for me they don’t feel like they really belong in this poem. They feel like part of a different poem, maybe the next one you write?

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  9. Linda Baie Avatar

    Love that you’ve made us think of this one word that seems to be a big part of our lives, in all ways, then the help, the ‘mend’, love that, too, a companion, Susan. I read that others are unsure of the end, yet it’s rather a wrap up of the journey to me, lives happening!

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  10. Tricia Stohr-Hunt Avatar

    Such wonderful images and language here! I especially like these lines that build.
    Mend is a word
    That fixes the break,
    That sets the bone,
    That patches the hole.
    Thank you for sharing!

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  11. tanita Avatar
    tanita

    I had to laugh at B’s bosomy comfort being a soft start to the wearying kicking and breaking. Maybe you only get to the splintering and then the mending of you’ve started from a good place.
    I like the last two lines but they open what you’re bringing to a close with the patiently held hard, giving courage for the mending that must go on. As Laura suggests, they feel like the springboard to another thought.

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  12. Susan T. Avatar
    Susan T.

    Oh, I love everyone’s comments! Thank you so much, poetry friends. Maybe those last two lines are really a follow-up poem, maybe not. I’ll have to let the tea steep a little longer and see. I did add them sort of last minute.

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  13. PATRICIA FRANZ Avatar

    Ooh…keep those last two lines! I love that they leave room for the reader to think more about the word.

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  14. Susan T. Avatar
    Susan T.

    Thanks for weighing in, Patricia! I was hesitant to post this poem because of its rough-draftness, but I have really enjoyed the conversation.

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  15. Denise Krebs Avatar

    Susan, that buxom promising B cracked me up. Your break as a verb stanza is powerful and sad. Then I loved that you follow up the breaks with a mend stanza. Lovely, fresh and healing.

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  16. Carol Varsalona Avatar

    Susan, I do love the stanza focusing on mend. It has a great flow to it. The last two lines are a keeper. They ask the reader to ponder.

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  17. Susan T. Avatar
    Susan T.

    Carol and Denise, I’m glad you stopped by. That B almost needs a bra! Ha! One reason I’m grateful for Poetry Friday is that it turns into Poetry Weekend with all the fun offerings to read.

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  18. Marcie Flinchum Atkins Avatar

    I love that the break is followed by a mend.

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  19. Liz Garton Scanlon Avatar

    From break to break to mend. What lovely movement!

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  20. Susan T. Avatar
    Susan T.

    Marcie and Liz, the break called for a mend in this poem! I’m glad y’all stopped by to visit.

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  21. Karen Edmisten Avatar

    Break, mend, and how we do these things. So well done and plenty to ponder, Susan. Loved this.

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  22. Susan T. Avatar

    Thanks so much, Karen! While I will not be watching TV this evening (ahem, state of the union, ahem), I do have some calls to make!

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