In an area not known for its chill

Green tips of tulips are rising out of the earth
Although we can’t see their shy peeks
After a bomb cyclone dropped a cargo of snow
Onto everything under the sun
Don’t call it a blizzard!
Just imagine the tulips—
the Blue Wows, the Honeymoons—
Waiting patiently to show us their spring.

(With a first line from Arthur Sze's "Black Center.")

Draft, Susan Thomsen, 2026

This month the Poetry Sisters are looking to poems by Arthur Sze, the current U.S. Poet Laureate, for inspiration. (See Tanita S. Davis's blog for details.) I was intrigued by their idea and open invitation, and decided to join in, taking the first line of Sze's "Black Center" and seeing where it led. The poem presented a real bouquet of images and language, and choosing only one line to borrow was hard. "Black Center" comes from the collection Sight Lines (2019), and you can read the poem at the publisher Copper Canyon.

The Poetry Friday roundup is at the talented Margaret Simon's Reflections on the Teche on February 27th.

Photo by Susan Thomsen

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33 responses to “Inspired by Arthur Sze”

  1. margaretsmn Avatar
    margaretsmn

    Those lovely green tips of tulips rising. My neighbor has tulips and they are so nice amidst all the brown dead stuff of winter.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      I cannot wait for all the spring flowers this year! Thank you for rounding up today, Margaret.

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  2. Denise Krebs Avatar

    Susan, thank you for yet another clever use of inspiration by Sze. I love “shy peeks” and “a cargo of snow”. You really painted a picture for us! Here’s to the tulips coming soon.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      I will definitely toast to that, Denise!

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  3. cvarsalona Avatar

    Susan, your photo makes me smile, wondering when we can see the flowers of springtime rising. You certainly used Sze’s line as a lovely opening to your poem. “Don’t call it a blizzard!
    Just imagine the tulips—.” Spring is popping in your poem.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Thank you for dropping by on Poetry Friday, Carol. Sometimes we actually see the tulips, sometimes not, because the deer eat them!

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  4. rosecappelli Avatar

    Tulips are my favorite! I especially love your last line. Thank you!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      I can’t wait for spring, but I heard we’re getting another storm on Monday. Typical March!

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  5. Liz Garton Scanlon Avatar
    Liz Garton Scanlon

    Ha! I LOVE the warmth and optimism implied and I love love love the names of the tulips!! Thanks for writing along with us, Susan!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      That was fun! Thanks to the Poetry Sisters for the prompt.

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  6. maryleehahn Avatar
    maryleehahn

    I love that we both buried spring flowers under the snow!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Yes, a blizzard synchronicity!

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  7. tee+d Avatar

    Didn’t it feel almost impossible to choose a single line? You found such an evocative place to begin and brava for how you took Mr. Sze’s lush imagery and ran with it. Here’s to the patient (or in my place, deeply impatient) waiting.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Totally impossible! Everything I read was a potential verse. I’m so happy there was a Poetry Sisters challenge/invitation to write this week. Thank you for choosing Arthur Sze.

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  8. Mona Voelkel Avatar

    Love your poem and love the idea of “Don’t call it a blizzard!/Just imagine the tulips—” Great advice and beautiful language and imaging with those the “Blue Wows, the Honeymoons!” Thank you for this glimpse of spring!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Mona, thank you for stopping by. I looked up the Brooklyn Botanical Garden, and just loved all the tulip names. What a beautiful place that is!

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  9. Karen Edmisten Avatar
    Karen Edmisten

    I love the image of the tulips waiting ever so patiently, Susan. What a beautiful piece from an inspiring opening line! 

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Thank you, Karen! I so look forward to seeing the tulips…and the daffodils!

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  10. jama Avatar

    What a lift!! Feel more hopeful and happy after reading your poem and seeing those tulips. Thanks!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      I’m so glad! Thanks for dropping by on a sunny Poetry Friday, Jama.

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  11. cathystenquist Avatar
    cathystenquist

    I love the idea of the flowers “patiently waiting to show us their spring.” Lovely imagery Susan!

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  12. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
    Susan.Thomsen

    Thanks, Cathy! I was happy to follow along after Arthur Sze.

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  13. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar

    You are super creative, Susan. I love what you did with “that one line you chose.” I’m intriqued by Sze’s work – I’ll have to look him up and read more. It was 51 here today! With snow still on the ground, I could feel spring around the corner, tomorrow’s high is only 17. The North Wind is blowing it in now!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Wait, what, Carol? 51 today and 17 tomorrow? Ouch. Thanks for your kind words! I do like Arthur Sze’s work.

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  14. Mitchell Linda Avatar
    Mitchell Linda

    “Don’t call it a Blizzard!” Ha! I love that line so much.

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Ha, Linda. Thank you! It may even be second speaker in the poem, hollering across the room.

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  15. patriciafranz Avatar

    I love “waiting patiently to show us their spring” — would that I could be so patient!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      This morning it is snowing again. Sigh. I need their patience, too!

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  16. Michelle Kogan Art, Illustration, & Writing Avatar

    💙 your poem, this line, “After a bomb cyclone dropped a cargo of snow” tulips, and “Black Center” Sze’s poem, and his tips tulips and more, thanks!😊

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      Thank you for stopping by, Michelle!

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  17. Tim Gels Avatar

    Thank you, Susan, for a poem of spring and its unpredictable weather! I rarely see tulips here in north Alabama, but our daffodils have been in full bloom for weeks now. While I don’t anticipate a “cargo of snow,” it’s not uncommon for our spring daffodils to contend with a snowfall. This year, I hope not!

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    1. Susan.Thomsen Avatar
      Susan.Thomsen

      You’re so lucky to already be seeing daffodils! We’re so ready for spring here in CT.

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